UPDATED versions of my tasks

I have updated and improved my pages in my created magazine to make them look better.

I completely changed my double page because i had taken some other photos in a recording studio and I thought that they would look better.
I have placed the text around the subject of the image, with white boxes so that the reader can see it clearly. I still believe that i need to make changes to both of these pages and I will continue to use my research to the best of my ability to create a magazine worthy of going onto a shop shelf.